Part 1 Overhaul Complete!

Part 1 has gotten a new coat of paint! I added more shading and rendering where applicable, fixed Cerril’s enormous forehead, and gave Peter’s hair the bouncy L’Oreal softness we’ve come to expect.

Pretty much every text box got another editing pass, too, clarifying and paring down wording. It’s still a fairly long and talky chapter, but now that’s much less of a bitter pill.

This is as good a time as any to add that if you like the comic and want to support it, one-time donations and Patreon subscriptions are very appreciated. I’m amazed at the response Parhelion has gotten, and every little bit helps.

I’ve got really fun stuff in the page-queue and beyond, and I’m very thankful for everyone’s support and encouragement.

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